26/08/2010

POETRYTHURSDAY±11

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Hüm (noun)
by Jen Hadfield


(For Bo)

Twilight, gloaming;
to walk blind
against the wind;

to be abject; lick snot
and rain from the top lip
like a sick calf.

To be blinded by rain
from the north.

To be blinded
by westerly rain.

To walk uphill
into a tarry peatcut
and bluster a deal
with the Trowes.

To cross the bull's field
in the dark.

To pass in the dark
a gate of hollow bars
inside which the wind is broaling.

To pass in the dark
a byre like a rotten walnut.

To not know the gate
till you run up against it.


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This will be the last poetry Thursday for now. I never really liked it as much as I thought I would, but I will continue to post poetry because you know...some of it is actually pretty good!

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2 comments:

  1. I wish I could love rain but after coming back from Santorini I have been doing nothing but hating on it. I haven't analysed this poem anyway so the meaning could be the complete opposite to rain haha :P

    But anyway, if you're free for a chat, I need some advice from someone who is older than me...

    sren25@gmail.com (just in case :P)

    Only if you have time though!

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  2. Serina: I have e-mailed you :)

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